Regret Not
Regret Not (06-05-06) initially written October 2005
The rage in me
Like a million hells
When you fail to see
What my sorrow tells
The anguish in me
In my veins through my heart
When I’m locked yet free
Never knew love would hurt
The happiness in me
Gradually dying away
As we fail to be
What we used to say
The love in me
Hasn’t died my friend
It just had to flee
To someone god has sent
The rage in me
Like a million hells
When you fail to see
What my sorrow tells
The anguish in me
In my veins through my heart
When I’m locked yet free
Never knew love would hurt
The happiness in me
Gradually dying away
As we fail to be
What we used to say
The love in me
Hasn’t died my friend
It just had to flee
To someone god has sent
scribbled proudly by tomboy @ 9:13 AM
8 Comments:
At 10:49 AM,
DooDi said…
I like this. It's sweet ,simple, full of rhythem and very well devided :D!
At 3:31 PM,
tomboy said…
thnkoo! i'm plannin to post more of my poems from time to time :)
At 5:16 PM,
Meticulousness said…
Sweet and simple ast stated by DiJo. Needs more expressions though, so try to excel in 'em.
Looking forward for more *smiles*
At 5:22 PM,
tomboy said…
thanks for the tip mysterious, i always aim for simplicity, ill try to go deeper
At 11:09 AM,
Anonymous said…
Hi this is a nice blog
I like the poem
Thanks for sharing
Wish you well
At 2:35 PM,
Red Dragon said…
WOW,,, nice pome you have here,
simple yet deep
At 7:46 PM,
Meticulousness said…
Outta curiosity, what’s with being a tomboy *grins*
At 8:08 PM,
tomboy said…
lol, i was a tomboy, lol, i'm more to the feminine side now *feeling proud*. i think i still can manage some manly macho tasks until now, lol :D
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