He Promised...(2 of 2)
She vowed to him
To love him forever
Through bright and dim
Sweet and savor
Abandon her he did
Certainly betraying her trust
And escaped from her warm heart
Into the cold arms of lust
He left her drowning
In her own tears
She gave her all to him
And all her gave her was spears
The love she wasted
Was love so pure
Honest, definite and sure
Now, the pain, she has to endure
He didn’t go blind
Or lose his ears
But lost his mind
And the reminiscence of years
He didn’t end up in a chair
Or rest in his grave
He was pitiless and unfair
To a woman so brave
She promised
He promised too
Yet we wonder
Who stayed true?
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To love him forever
Through bright and dim
Sweet and savor
Abandon her he did
Certainly betraying her trust
And escaped from her warm heart
Into the cold arms of lust
He left her drowning
In her own tears
She gave her all to him
And all her gave her was spears
The love she wasted
Was love so pure
Honest, definite and sure
Now, the pain, she has to endure
He didn’t go blind
Or lose his ears
But lost his mind
And the reminiscence of years
He didn’t end up in a chair
Or rest in his grave
He was pitiless and unfair
To a woman so brave
She promised
He promised too
Yet we wonder
Who stayed true?
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!MY HUNDREDTH POST !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
scribbled proudly by tomboy @ 10:48 PM
4 Comments:
At 5:32 PM,
Anonymous said…
You’ve rendered me speechless.
At 8:57 PM,
Red Dragon said…
How come we guys are allways bad!!!
At 10:43 PM,
ManicMane said…
Your turn of phrase is definitely improving, Zee. Keep at it, and you'll see nothing but progress. Well done, girl.
At 3:32 PM,
superpowerfulman said…
Red dragon is right-
we arent all tht bad you know-
but manicmane is right too- you are good.
Congratualations on the century
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