--chocolate--
Chocolate (06-05-06)
Ah chocolate
Could there be anything like you
Any flavor in this universe
Any taste, texture or hue
Ah chocolate
Could there be any other indulgence
An aphrodisiac, an addicting love at first glance
Ah chocolate
Let it melt smoothly on my tongue
Let me melt away with it like a love song
Ah chocolate
Fill me with ecstasy, joy and happiness
With all your nuts, chips and creaminess
Ah chocolate
Be white, milky, in pieces or bar
For it is your tenderness that makes me reach the highest star
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. is it me or is chocolate the other face of sexual desires?
Ah chocolate
Could there be anything like you
Any flavor in this universe
Any taste, texture or hue
Ah chocolate
Could there be any other indulgence
An aphrodisiac, an addicting love at first glance
Ah chocolate
Let it melt smoothly on my tongue
Let me melt away with it like a love song
Ah chocolate
Fill me with ecstasy, joy and happiness
With all your nuts, chips and creaminess
Ah chocolate
Be white, milky, in pieces or bar
For it is your tenderness that makes me reach the highest star
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. is it me or is chocolate the other face of sexual desires?
scribbled proudly by tomboy @ 10:04 PM
14 Comments:
At 10:11 PM,
Azarakhsh said…
Ahhh sweet sinful carnal desireeeeeeeeeessssssssss....
I REMEMBER THIS POEM!!! You showed it to me before exams hehehe.
And of COURSE chocolate replaces sexual desire. Its safer. No consequences from bitings the *ahem* nuts. And the neighbours dont hear you. EAT AWAY
At 10:12 PM,
Azarakhsh said…
I'm not high... really...
At 1:27 PM,
Solidus said…
I LOVE chocolate, can't live without it.. It's as important to me as girls.. :D
Good poem..
At 6:16 PM,
Snooky said…
^ And its equally improtant to girls, or at least the majority of girls are chocoholic.
At 7:03 PM,
Meticulousness said…
Simple yet wonderful.
Though, how come you used 'indulgence' & 'glance' to meter up your poem? They don't form any sort of a rhyme...
Another point,...
if you're directing your words to chocolate, then how come you'd say:
Ah chocolate
Let it melt smoothly on my tongue
Let me melt away with it like a love song
Shouldn’t it be replaced by you? For example:
Ah chocolate
I'll let you melt smoothly on my tongue
So let me melt away with you like a love song
Also, 'Song' would only meter up with 'tongue' if you read it with an accent.
Loved the idea and yeah, Belgium chocolate does turn you on. Try it! *Grins*
At 9:39 PM,
Red Dragon said…
sexual desires
At 8:54 AM,
tomboy said…
rz: yessss!!!
solidus: we all do!!! chocolate rules!
snooky: most of us are, always remember, its chocolate chocolate chocolate!
mysterious: a critic at lasssst!! :D, well didnt concentrate much with that( i had chocolate in my mouth) and i rarely alter my work or correct, ill work on it, thanks for the advice!
red dragon: yes! sexual desires!
At 8:45 PM,
superpowerfulman said…
Scrumdidlyicious
At 9:43 PM,
Meticulousness said…
^^ *Google’s it immediately*
At 10:02 PM,
tomboy said…
superpowerfulman:
Scrumdidlyicious indeed.
mysterious: ummm, wont be easy :P , you'll have to conatct him for that
At 3:56 PM,
Fast_HacKinG said…
No thanks, I don't smoke, I don't eat chocolates, I don't like seafood. Thank you ma'am!
Is is true that chocolate a turn on for girls? I mean, it make them horny and such? Is that true? *rolleyes*, yeah I'm from the plant next to yours ;)
At 7:47 PM,
tomboy said…
fast hacking: yup! its an aphrodisiac and does initiate the "feelings" :D
At 10:41 AM,
Dudi said…
That poem hit the spot for me and chocolate!
I love that...an ode to chocolate :)
From a chocoholic to another....i hear you girl!!!
At 11:13 PM,
Joey said…
ahh the aphrodisiac..what to do... what to do...im sooooo eating flakes rite now...and NO IM NOT HIGH EITHER!!
whats wid the freakin word verification??
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